10.22541/au.163111064.40864768/v1
This is a review of the article "It’s Time to Talk About HPC Storage: Perspectives on the Past and Future," for the Leadership Computing department.Comments:Great article! I have only a few small suggestions for clarity/readability below. Abstract: suggest changing "especially as relates to the use of HPC" to "especially related to the use of HPC"paragraph 2: " ORNL Health Data Sciences Institute" -> "Oak Ridge National Laboratory (ORNL) Health Data Sciences Institute"Fig 2 caption: "Each access must traverse multiple distinct protocol hops, with its own interrupt…